tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-323136386402970334.post9114621371042778907..comments2024-02-15T02:22:21.512-08:00Comments on ਪੰਜਾਬੀ ਕਵਿਤਾਵਾਂ .....: ਖੁੱਲੇ ਜ਼ਖ਼ਮ.....हरकीरत ' हीर'http://www.blogger.com/profile/09462263786489609976noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-323136386402970334.post-55033983372033008352021-01-23T23:41:24.581-08:002021-01-23T23:41:24.581-08:00Happy Valentine Day Flowers
Happy Valentine Day Ro...<a href="https://www.indiagift.in/occasions-delivery-online/valentine-day/valentine-day-flowers" rel="nofollow">Happy Valentine Day Flowers</a><br /><a href="https://www.indiagift.in/occasions-delivery-online/valentine-day/valentine-day-roses" rel="nofollow">Happy Valentine Day Roses</a><br />Daisyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10345431336454023899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-323136386402970334.post-37262946579920110672009-10-16T08:32:15.134-07:002009-10-16T08:32:15.134-07:00ਦੇਖ ਦਰ੍ਦ-ਏ-ਆਸ਼ਨਾ !
ਮੇਰਾ ਹਰ ਰਿਸਦਾ ਜ਼ਖ਼ਮ
ਤੇਰੀ ਰਹਿਮਤਾਂ...ਦੇਖ ਦਰ੍ਦ-ਏ-ਆਸ਼ਨਾ !<br />ਮੇਰਾ ਹਰ ਰਿਸਦਾ ਜ਼ਖ਼ਮ<br />ਤੇਰੀ ਰਹਿਮਤਾਂ ਦਾ<br />ਸ਼ੁਕਰਗੁਜ਼ਾਰ ਹੈ...!"<br /><br />kuchh na kahoon kuchh bhi na kahoon.श्याम जुनेजा https://www.blogger.com/profile/11410693251523370597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-323136386402970334.post-19360156186439059932009-09-05T10:22:25.123-07:002009-09-05T10:22:25.123-07:00tees da nazm ban jaana hi dard da khulaasa hai.......tees da nazm ban jaana hi dard da khulaasa hai......through poem it is very difficult to explain but you simply did it.I cannot help reading last lines repeatedly.....gs panesarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06103190704901773509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-323136386402970334.post-91516330875948210232009-05-13T04:46:00.000-07:002009-05-13T04:46:00.000-07:00A wonderfully worded and touching poem. The last l...A wonderfully worded and touching poem. The last lines were simply beautiful:<br />"ਹੁਣ ਮੈਂ <br />ਜ਼ਖਮਾਂ ਨੁੰ<br />ਖੁੱਲਾ ਰਖਦੀ ਹਾਂ<br />ਤੇ ਮੇਰੀ ਹਰ ਟੀਸ<br />ਨਜ਼ਮ ਬਣ<br />ਸਫਿਆਂ 'ਤੇ<br />ਸਿਸਕ੍ਣ ਲਗ ਪੈਂਦੀ ਹੈ .....!!<br /><br />There is a flow in the poem, which lends beauty and rhythm to it.The Literary Jewelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11421174480905206379noreply@blogger.com